Essay 2 Draft 1 (2-1)

Peer Response

Do THREE peer responses. A fourth counts as extra credit

1. SAY BACK what you hear as their ESSAY QUESTION and THESIS

2. Comment on this framing for the essay--any changes you might suggest for the essay question/thesis?

3. POINT to what you like so far about what they are doing with this essay?

4. WHAT questions do you have for the author at this point.

Writer's Review 2-1

Discuss what you think of your own draft so far. Where are you currently struggling? What sort of perspective has the peer response given you? The next draft needs to be more fully developed and structured--what do you think you need to do to write this next draft?